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AG 232
Chapter 7

Panel 1 (row 1, left)
Rachel stands infront of a door, there is a *DING DONG* sound.
Rachel: I'll get to the bottom of this feeling I have-- but unlike that fool William, I'll do it properly.

Panel 2 (row 1, right)
The door opens, a woman stands in the doorway. Rachel looks to her.
Rachel: Hello-- Mrs. Montgomery? Is William home?

Panel 3 (row 2, full row)
The woman looks confused, Rachel looks on with a serious look.
Woman: You must have the wrong house, sweetie.
Rachel: William-- you're son.
Woman: My-- Son? I don't have a son.

Panel 4 (row 3, left)
Rachel looks understanding, the lady is still confused.
Rachel: Of course you don't. Can I speak to your daughter, than?
Woman: Uh-- one second...

Panel 5 (row 3, right)
Rachel stands alone at the doorway.
"Michelle, you have a visitor"
Rachel: Michelle...?

Panel 6 (row 4, left)
A young girl, about 11 or 12, stands at the doorway, a little confused. Rachel is a little confused, but slightly intrigued. The girl has long black hair, and resembles William.
Rachel: Your name is Michelle? Are you an only child?
Michelle: Yes Ma'am. Are you here as my girl scout big sister?
Rachel: No.

Panel 7 (row 4, right)
Rachel sits alone on the curb, rubbing her chin.
"So there was no sign of William there-- did I get the right house-- there were a couple Montgomerys in town-- but this one had the most likely location-- They didn't have a son or a daughter named Willow-- but that girl-- she looked a lot like William-- and more importantly--she looked even more like Willow... But why does none of the people who should know, KNOW?"
©2008-2009 ~RayneShikama
:iconrayneshikama:

Author's Comments

The plot thickens. Someone needs to stir it.

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:iconbrooks10111989:
twilight zonish almost. . .

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Let me open your throat right now, I want to make you all mine. . .
:iconbrooks10111989:
could it be that william is able to become a girl his age and is also able to change his age?

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Let me open your throat right now, I want to make you all mine. . .
:iconbrooks10111989:
god, i wish i was able to read people's minds.

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Let me open your throat right now, I want to make you all mine. . .
:icongrevor:
I did not see this twist coming.

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初めは容易である-継続は堅い。
Beginning is easy - Continuing is hard.
(Yes, I think I wrote that wrong.)

If it aint French or Japanese, then I use Google Translate
:iconamon-the-hunter:
Hmm, whats the odds that all this is happening to Rachel. I think it's ok for her to look into this, but if she goes to far the outcome will be troubling. Also, for once, I've got no speculations. The odds that William can change age too is highly unlikely, but at the same time not impossible (especially AG world). I'm starting to get as confused as Rachel..lol

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Don't fear the kraft, Embrace it!
:iconsnizman:
didn't see that coming...
:icongeoffreak:
...and we have our William replacement, Rachel!
:iconangela999:
No, you don't. Trust me on this...

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Tada no ningen ni kyoumi nai

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:iconangela999:
*whispers thoughts to Rachael through the computer* Go back to the house Rachael, nothing bad will happen to you. Hehe.

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Tada no ningen ni kyoumi nai

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