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AG 233
Chapter 7

Panel 1 (row 1, left)
Rachel stands infront of another house, looking at a piece of paper.
"So this is where Willow and her family live...? How could I not have noticed?"

Panel 2 (row 1, right)
Rachel looks down the street, an arrow points to a house.
"How could someone move in four houses down and me not notice? I've either been too wrapped up in my own worries or I am right in my suspicions.

Panel 3 (row 2, left)
Rachel knocks on the door.
"keep your cool-- keep your cool..."

Panel 4 (row 2, right)
Willow answers the door, looking a little surprised and nervous. Rachel waves a hand nonchalantly.
Willow: Oh! Rachel-- how-- nice it is to see you...
Rachel: I'm not here to start trouble, I wanted to come over and make peace for what happened earlier.

Panel 5 (row 3, left)
Willow looks relieved. Rachel keeps a straight face.
Willow: Oh that's great! I was really worried after how you went off in the gym--
Rachel: Well-- I--
Willow: Andrea told me what happened a few days ago. I don't know how the connection was made, but I'd probably go off on someone too thinking they were related to someone who did such bad things.

Panel 6 (row 3, right)
Willow looks up a bit confused. Rachel lowers her gaze.
Rachel: That's nothing compared to what else has happened in the past couple months.
Willow: What's that?
Rachel: Nothing.

Panel 7 (row 4, full row)
Willow steps to the side and motions Rachel in, Rachel looks up and inside.
Willow: Would you like to come in? I was helping my mom bake some cookies, but I am sure she wouldn't mind me taking a break to talk with a friend.
Rachel: Uh-- sure.
©2008-2009 ~RayneShikama
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Admittedly-- Rachel's approach to investigation is a little less aggressive as William's was.
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Typo! Love is soppose to be live. heh. But now i wonderiing a heck of alot what happen to William. Keep dishing out the story!
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typo: here not hear
Good.

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Don't f*&^ with Shion Sonozaki!
Dammit! She went to the wrong house! I guess I should have specified when I sent my telepathic missive. Oh well, my bad. :p

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This is interesting and hard to predict. I am liking it.

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初めは容易である-継続は堅い。
Beginning is easy - Continuing is hard.
(Yes, I think I wrote that wrong.)

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Okay, I am pleasantly surprised... Rachel isn't being as dumb about this as I thought she would. Actually, she's doing it more how I would.
Aww, Rachel made a new friend. :D

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Schrödinger's breakfast
well at least she isn't being completely stupid about it, like William and most investigative teens (see also: Harry Potter)

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Watch this space [_]
This plot is so thick you can cut it with a knife....

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when in deadly danger
and when beset by doubt
run in little circles
wave your arms and shout

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