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AG 250
Chapter 8

Panel 1 (row 1, left)
Rachel sits quietly on a bench outside of school.

Panel 2 (row 1, right)
Rachel looks up slightly at people walking by, she seems a little depressed.

Panel 3 (row 2, full row)
Katie comes running up, looking frantic, Rachel looks over to her in a bored manor.
Katie: Rachel! You can't make me worry so much! You say you're going to do something crazy and don't tell me what it is and then just disappear all night. I tried to call like twenty times but no one at your house knew where you were and lord knows you could have just been dead on the side of the road somewhere beyond help and what the hell happened to your hair!?

Panel 4 (row 3, left)
Rachel motions a calmness with her hands, Katie still looks a little frantic.
Rachel: breath.

Panel 5 (row 3, right)
Katie grabs Rachel's shoulders and shakes her slightly. Rachel looks moderately passive.
Katie: What the hell happened!?
Rachel: It's a long story.
Katie: We've got time. Spill it.

Panel 6 (row 4, left)
*RIIIIING* the school bell rings. Rachel brushes Katie's hands off her shoulder. Katie looks completely defeated.
Rachel: Time for class.
Katie: ...

Panel 7 (row 4, right)
Rachel walks off, hands in her pockets, shoulders a little slumped. Katie growls in the direction of Rachel in anger
Katie: Damnit Rachel Hawke!
©2008-2009 ~RayneShikama
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For those of you who are not on the forums, I have named Chapter 8 "Hallowed Ends"

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:iconrudedude55:
cool start to the chapter, wonder if shes going to tell Katie or not...

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Now I must go build a time-traveling lazyboy chair and shoot JFK, I'll be back whenever
:iconamon-the-hunter:
Well, here comes trouble. Rachael is going to class and Travis will be there... this will be awkward.

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Don't fear the kraft, Embrace it!
:iconarmiture:
Interesting that even when pissed off, Katie manages to keep from calling her Ryan and calls her Rachel.
:iconcaellachtigereye:
Yes ... interesting ...
:iconjosiemorningstar:
Well she's gotten used to it... I mean... how long has Ryan been 'Rachel' ?
:iconshadedspriter:
just read all the scripts (catching up on six months worth of comics.)...I can't wait to see where this chapter goes.
:iconaguydude:
Just read through the scripts. I've made a realization that is, in hindsight, rather obvious. The main reason Abstract Gender is fun to read is because the storyline is interesting. While it makes for a nice draw (especially for newer readers), the artwork is largely superfluous. In the event that you are unable to find new artists for an extended period of time, I hope that won't stop you from continuing to write scripts.
:iconsgthydra:
I agree.

Art for AG was never really that good.

Story, however, has always been top notch.

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We sit together
The Mountian and I
Until only the mountian remains
-Li Po

I believe in the Flying Spaghetti Monster, our lord and savior. Post this in your sig if you too have been touched by his noodly appendege. RAmen.
:iconl0yd3-r33d:
yes drawing or not.....it's still good......but let's still hope we get a new artist

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"Many years from now, dieing in your beds. Would you be willing to trade all the days, from this to that, for one chance,just one, to come back here and say. that they, may take our lives, but they'll never take,OUR FREEDOM!"
-William Wallace

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